Hi Anna, First of all, if you want me to seriously look at your images, they need to be oriented correctly. I think the initial floorplans seem to make sense and look like they are logical, but I don't understand how your design is based upon your initial concept. I still see a big box and a little box that are unrelated to its surrounding context. The big box/little box could be so many things, for example a parking structure connected to a Target or a clinic connected to a hospital. I think if you want this scheme to work, you need to develop it much more and focus upon your specific vision of the spaces, the quality of light, and the materiality of this building. Maybe I am not seeing what you are seeing because you are not communicating it. I don't know how long you have until your final presentation, or what the final product of this couse is expected to be, but it seems to me that in the last few weeks you have shown a lot of sketches, but haven't done any work that goes past a rough sketch. I think in the amount of time you've had, you should be further along in the design process.
I also, am very dissapointed in the progress of this project. You need to be working to scale, and really engaging your concept in the site. The site has a slope that your building could carve into or your building could hold back part of the site. You could carve the connection between these two building through the site. Sections through the building and site. Plans, Plans, Plans - 3d massing with the slope of the site.
Hi Anna,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, if you want me to seriously look at your images, they need to be oriented correctly. I think the initial floorplans seem to make sense and look like they are logical, but I don't understand how your design is based upon your initial concept. I still see a big box and a little box that are unrelated to its surrounding context. The big box/little box could be so many things, for example a parking structure connected to a Target or a clinic connected to a hospital. I think if you want this scheme to work, you need to develop it much more and focus upon your specific vision of the spaces, the quality of light, and the materiality of this building. Maybe I am not seeing what you are seeing because you are not communicating it. I don't know how long you have until your final presentation, or what the final product of this couse is expected to be, but it seems to me that in the last few weeks you have shown a lot of sketches, but haven't done any work that goes past a rough sketch. I think in the amount of time you've had, you should be further along in the design process.
I also, am very dissapointed in the progress of this project. You need to be working to scale, and really engaging your concept in the site. The site has a slope that your building could carve into or your building could hold back part of the site. You could carve the connection between these two building through the site. Sections through the building and site. Plans, Plans, Plans - 3d massing with the slope of the site.
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